by Tammi Sauer
In the spring of 2013, two unlikely friends swam onto the picture book scene—Nugget and Fang. From the start, Nugget & Fang, written by me and illustrated by Michael Slack, did really well. I was proud of our standalone. It never even occurred to me to write a sequel.
Then in 2017, my new editor at Clarion, Lynne Polvino, asked if I’d be interested in revisiting a certain underwater world.
Now, all these years later, my favorite fishy friends are back in the SEA-quel, NUGGET & FANG GO TO SCHOOL.
When Fang the shark is invited by his friends to attend Mini Minnows Elementary, he thinks it’s a great idea! But then his first day of school arrives . . . and suddenly, he’s not so sure. He’s not very good at reading or math. He doesn’t exactly fit in with his classmates. And the teacher looks crabby! Can Fang’s best friend, Nugget, and the other minnows help him discover that school really is FANG-TASTIC?
When a publishing house asks you to write a sequel, please know this situation comes with advantages and disadvantages.
Advantages:
- You already know your characters.
- You already know the tone.
- You already know the style.
- You already know the voice.
- You already know the general setting.
- You already know the basic pacing.
Disadvantages:
- The book needs to be written.
- The book needs to be at least as good as the original, preferably better.
- The book needs to appeal to fans of the original as well as to people who have never read it.
- The book needs to meet a deadline.
- The book needs to get approval from the publishing house, and, if the book does not get this approval, you can’t submit it elsewhere. Plus, you, um, still have to write a sequel that gets approval.
- The book needs to be similar to the original. Oh. But it needs to be different, too.
But how do you actually write a sequel????? In my experience, such a task involves gallons and gallons of tropical tea, endless quantities of chips and salsa from Torchy’s Tacos, and a critique group that reminds you that you can do this.
These are the three things that were most helpful to me as I wrote Nugget & Fang Go to School:
- I read the original. Then I read it again. And again. And again. After that, I read it again. This not only helped me to dive back into Nugget and Fang’s world, but it helped me to rediscover the rhythm of their story.
- I typed out the text of the original and paginated it. This gave me a clear and concise visual of my pacing and page turns. I kept the paginated text of book 1 right next to me as I worked to create the text for book 2.
- I played with words. (Book 1 incorporated lots of wordplay so book 2 had to have that as well.)
First, I compiled a list of the wordplay that I had used in book 1:
- Holy mackerel!
- Swim for your lives!
- Sounds fishy to me.
- Oh, my algae!
- I feel seasick!
- Have you lost your gills?
- Catch of the day
- Fang’s heart sank.
- You’re fintastic.
- Fanned his gills.
- Wrung his fins.
This served as a cheat sheet. I knew what wordplay absolutely could not go into book 2. I then wrote a long list of different potential wordplay to use in the sequel. These are the items that made their way into book 2:
- Other fish in the sea
- Oh, my starfish!
- Swim for cover!
- Cool as a sea cucumber
- School of fish
- Crabby
- Sea of faces
- Fang-tastic
- Best friend in the whole underwater world
- Made a splash
- A fish out of water
- There was nothing fishy about that.
Having lots of new wordplay to choose from allowed me to give book 2 a similar feel to book 1, but it helped me to make the new book fresh as well.
Overall, writing a sequel is quite a challenge, but, if my editor asks me to write another book about Nugget and Fang, well, wild seahorses couldn’t pull me away!
Luckily, wild seahorses aren’t pulling away our giveaway—a copy of the chummy SEA-quel to one lucky blog reader. Leave a comment below to enter. A winner will be randomly selected in a couple weeks!
Good luck!
Tammi Sauer is a full-time author who presents at schools and conferences across the nation. She has 28 published picture books with major publishing houses including HarperCollins, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, Penguin Random House, Scholastic Press, Simon & Schuster, and Sterling. Her book Your Alien, an NPR Best Book of the Year, was recently made into a musical that is currently touring planet earth. (Well, the United States anyway.) Visit her at tammisauer.com and follow her on Twitter at @SauerTammi.
